[lfs-book] r9842 - in trunk/BOOK: . bootscripts/lfs/init.d chapter01 chapter05 chapter07

bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat May 5 20:56:35 PDT 2012


Author: bdubbs
Date: 2012-05-05 21:56:30 -0600 (Sat, 05 May 2012)
New Revision: 9842

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/init.d/sysctl
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter07/usage.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/packages.ent
Log:
Various minor text changes to both book and bootscripts.


Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/init.d/sysctl
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/init.d/sysctl	2012-05-01 23:15:08 UTC (rev 9841)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/init.d/sysctl	2012-05-06 03:56:30 UTC (rev 9842)
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
 ### BEGIN INIT INFO
 # Provides:            sysctl
-# Required-Start:      mountkernfs
+# Required-Start:      mountvirtfs
 # Should-Start:
 # Required-Stop:
 # Should-Stop:

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2012-05-01 23:15:08 UTC (rev 9841)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2012-05-06 03:56:30 UTC (rev 9842)
@@ -37,6 +37,16 @@
 
 -->
     <listitem>
+      <para>2012-05-05</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+         <listitem>
+           <para>[bdubbs] - Various minor text changes to 
+           both book and bootscripts.</para>
+         </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>2012-05-01</para>
       <itemizedlist>
          <listitem>
@@ -45,6 +55,7 @@
          </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
+
     <listitem>
       <para>2012-04-29</para>
       <itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml	2012-05-01 23:15:08 UTC (rev 9841)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml	2012-05-06 03:56:30 UTC (rev 9842)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   process has been designed to minimize the risks for new readers and to provide
   the most educational value at the same time.</para>
 
-  <important>
+  <note>
     <para>Before continuing, be aware of the name of the working platform,
     often referred to as the target triplet. A simple way to determine the
     name of the target triplet is to run the <command>config.guess</command>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     and noting the output. The authoritative reference covering all platforms
     is in the <filename>shlib-versions</filename> file in the root of the Glibc
     source tree.</para>
-  </important>
+  </note>
 
   <para>Some key technical points of how the <xref
   linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> build method works:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/usage.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/usage.xml	2012-05-01 23:15:08 UTC (rev 9841)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/usage.xml	2012-05-06 03:56:30 UTC (rev 9842)
@@ -103,7 +103,8 @@
   <para>As a debugging convenience, the functions script also logs all output
   to <filename>/run/var/bootlog</filename>.  Since the <filename
   class="directory">/run</filename> directory is a tmpfs, this file is not
-  persistent across boots.</para>
+  persistent across boots, however it is appended to the more permanent file
+  <filename>/var/log/boot.log</filename> at the end of the boot process.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2012-05-01 23:15:08 UTC (rev 9841)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2012-05-06 03:56:30 UTC (rev 9842)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20120501">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "May 01, 2012">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20120505">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "May 05, 2012">
 <!ENTITY copyrightdate "1999-2012"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not – -->
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.2">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->

Modified: trunk/BOOK/packages.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/packages.ent	2012-05-01 23:15:08 UTC (rev 9841)
+++ trunk/BOOK/packages.ent	2012-05-06 03:56:30 UTC (rev 9842)
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@
 <!ENTITY less-ch6-du "3.5 MB">
 <!ENTITY less-ch6-sbu "less than 0.1 SBU">
 
-<!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-version "20120409">                 <!-- Scripts depend on this format -->
+<!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-version "20120505">                 <!-- Scripts depend on this format -->
 <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-size "BOOTSCRIPTS-SIZE KB">         <!-- Updated in Makefile -->
 <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-url "&downloads-root;lfs-bootscripts-&lfs-bootscripts-version;.tar.bz2">
 <!ENTITY lfs-bootscripts-md5 "BOOTSCRIPTS-MD5SUM">           <!-- Updated in Makefile -->




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