A little editing:The LFS description needs some work

Gerard Beekmans gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jan 31 17:14:59 PST 2001


On January 31, 2001 08:10 pm, you wrote:
> Gerard Beekmans <gerard at linuxfromscratch.org> wrote:
> > This book is intended for Linux users who want to build their own custom
> > build Linux system. Reasons for wanting to build such a system are
>
> You should think about onmly using build once in the first sentence so it
> flows better.

Okay.

> ps.  should I have responded like this to point these out?

Yes that's fine. Thanks

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