A little editing:The LFS description needs some work

Gerard Beekmans gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jan 31 17:16:37 PST 2001


On January 31, 2001 08:10 pm, you wrote:
> Gerard Beekmans <gerard at linuxfromscratch.org> wrote:
> > This book is intended for Linux users who want to build their own custom
> > build Linux system. Reasons for wanting to build such a system are
>
> You should think about onmly using build once in the first sentence so it
> flows better.

I've changed it to "...who want to setup their own custom build Linux 
system". It still doesn't flow and sound nicely. I'll wait for more comments 
and I'll have another look tomorrow with a fresh brain.

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