A little editing:The LFS description needs some work

Craig M. Reece craigthulu at earthlink.net
Wed Jan 31 17:19:16 PST 2001


On Wednesday, January 31, 2001 08:16 pm, Gerard Beekmans spoke thusly:
> On January 31, 2001 08:10 pm, you wrote:
> > Gerard Beekmans <gerard at linuxfromscratch.org> wrote:
> > > This book is intended for Linux users who want to build their own
> > > custom build Linux system. Reasons for wanting to build such a system
> > > are
> >
> > You should think about onmly using build once in the first sentence so it
> > flows better.
>
> I've changed it to "...who want to setup their own custom build Linux
> system". It still doesn't flow and sound nicely. I'll wait for more
> comments and I'll have another look tomorrow with a fresh brain.

Try "custom-built".


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