A little editing:The LFS description needs some work

Oren J Byer ojbyer at usa.net
Wed Jan 31 17:28:04 PST 2001


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> I've changed it to "...who want to setup their own custom build
> Linux  system". It still doesn't flow and sound nicely. I'll wait
> for more comments  and I'll have another look tomorrow with a fresh
> brain.

How about: "...who want to create their own custom Linux system." ?

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