Minor words missed in Chap 3 - proposed fix patch attached.

Bill's LFS Login lfsbill at wlmcs.com
Mon Feb 3 13:12:30 PST 2003


'Nuff said?

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Bill Maltby
lfsbill at wlmcs.com
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diff -r -U 4 CVS/XML/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/creatingpart.xml CVS-Edit/XML/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
--- CVS/XML/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/creatingpart.xml	2002-12-10 21:00:18.000000000 -0500
+++ CVS-Edit/XML/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/creatingpart.xml	2003-02-03 16:02:40.000000000 -0500
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@
 The swap partition for your LFS system can be the same one as for your host
 system, so you won't have to create another if your host system already uses
 a swap partition.</para>
 
-<para>Start the <filename>cfdisk</filename> program with as argument the name
-of the hard disk upon which the new partition must be created -- for example
+<para>Start the <filename>cfdisk</filename> program with an argument naming
+the hard disk upon which the new partition must be created -- for example
 <filename>/dev/hda</filename> for the primary IDE disk. Create a Linux native
-partition, and if needed a swap partition. Please refer to the man page of
+partition, and if needed, a swap partition. Please refer to the man page of
 <filename>cfdisk</filename> if you don't yet know how to use the program.</para>
 
 <para>Remember the designation of your new partition -- something like
 <filename>hda5</filename>. This book will refer to it as the LFS partition.


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