Printed book ready

Bruce Dubbs bdubbs at swbell.net
Wed Oct 6 22:10:39 PDT 2004


Gerard Beekmans wrote:

>Hi guys,
>
>The testing branch now contains the last edits and layout changes. This
>marks the end of the process and it's ready to be published. This means
>LFS-6.0 is ready, too.
>
Overall, its very nice.  Here are some nit-picks:

In some places, (1.2, 1.4.1, 6.59, 7.4.{4,5}, 7.8, 9.4)the bullets seem 
to be outdented.  They are OK in 3.2 and 3.3.  The bullets in 4.3 are 
not outdented, but look like they should be indented a little.


The bullet in 5.14.1 and other option explanations (5.22.1, 5.24.1, etc) 
look out of place.


I'd really like to see s/Static/Standard/g  in the SBU section (4.5).  
(Two places)

  -- Bruce




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