Text removed between LFS 5.1 and Testing

Randy McMurchy randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu Sep 9 22:07:59 PDT 2004


Jeremy Utley wrote:
> On Thu, 09 Sep 2004 18:25:56 -0600
> Gerard Beekmans <gerard at linuxfromscratch.org> wrote:
> 
> 
>>On Thu, 2004-09-09 at 16:35, Jeremy Utley wrote:
>>Jeremy,
>>
>>I can see if it can be added to the book now (ie if there is time to
>>properly edit it).
>>
>>I think we can still do it. I'm still waiting on the section regarding
>>the bootcd explanation so I can take both pieces, edit them and put
>>them
>>into the book.
> 
> 
> Shouldn't be too difficult.  The section I'm referring to is only one
> paragraph, and reads pretty well already:
> 
> From: 
> http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/view/stable/chapter09/reboot.html:
> ---------
>  Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to reboot
> your computer. However, you should be aware of a few things. The system
> you have created in this book is quite minimal, and most likely will not
> have the functionality you would need to be able to continue forward. By
> installing a few extra packages from the BLFS book while still in our
> current chroot environment, you can leave yourself in a much better
> position to continue on once you reboot into your new LFS installation.
> Installing a text mode web browser, such as Lynx, you can easily view
> the BLFS book in one virtual terminal, while building packages in
> another. The GPM package will also allow you to perform copy/paste
> actions in your virtual terminals. Lastly, if you are in a situation
> where static IP configuration does not meet your networking
> requirements, installing packages such as dhcpcd or ppp at this point
> might also be useful.
> 
> Now that we have said that, lets move on to booting our shiny new LFS
> installation for the first time! First exit from the chroot environment:
> --------
> 
> Maybe a few of the more proper english experts here can assist in
> cleaning that up a little :)

Just a personal pet peeve of mine.....

Ditch the "our"s and "we"s....

It should be "your"s and "you"s....

-- 
Randy



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