gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue May 26 17:58:17 PDT 2009
> #2326 Modifications to Preface gerard
> Some changes have been made. Waiting for final review to close.
> #2092 Switch all text back from third person to second person pronouns gerard
> Some fixes have been made. We can probably promote this to 6.5
Agreed on #2092. It's set to Milestone 6.5 now.
I think I caught the bulk of the 3rd person edits. A few extra pairs of
eyes are always appreciated.
The Preface is about done I think, but any additional suggestions are
welcome. If nothing else, a grammar check is welcome (ESL and all). I'll
assign that "From Power Up To Bash Prompt" ticket to myself as it fits
within the scope of the Preface.
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