[lfs-dev] [lfs-book] r11190 - trunk/BOOK/chapter06

Milton Ott milton at mettech.me
Fri Feb 24 21:02:59 PST 2017


On Fri, Feb 24, 2017 at 08:43:02PM -0600, DJ Lucas wrote:
> 
> 
> On 02/24/2017 10:12 AM, bdubbs at higgs.linuxfromscratch.org wrote:
> > Author: bdubbs
> > Date: Fri Feb 24 08:12:41 2017
> > New Revision: 11190
> > 
> > Log:
> > Text clarification
> > 
> > Modified:
> >    trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml
> > 
> > Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml	Sun Feb 19 15:06:02 2017	(r11189)
> > +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/coreutils.xml	Fri Feb 24 08:12:41 2017	(r11190)
> > @@ -112,8 +112,8 @@
> >  <screen><userinput remap="test">su nobody -s /bin/bash \
> >            -c "PATH=$PATH make RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes check"</userinput></screen>
> > 
> > -    <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console, but
> > -    passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
> > +    <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console such as
> > +    the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
> 
> I think we've discussed this a few times, but for review. The choice of
> indefinite article is defined by phonetics (sound), not written
> representation.
> 
> 's/a X/an X/'
> 
> --DJ
> 
for what its worth the word environment could also use a touch up.

commit 036f45e888b25974f12d0f22f705d4930562d09b
Author: bdubbs <bdubbs at 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689>
Date:   Sat Feb 25 04:18:08 2017 +0000

    Typo

    git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11191 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

diff --git a/chapter06/coreutils.xml b/chapter06/coreutils.xml
index a753bb4..50e9d47 100644
--- a/chapter06/coreutils.xml
+++ b/chapter06/coreutils.xml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
           -c "PATH=$PATH make RUN_EXPENSIVE_TESTS=yes check"</userinput></screen>

     <para>The test-getlogin test is known to fail on a virtual console such as
     -    the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in a X terminal.</para>
     +    the chroot envronment here, but passes if run in an X terminal.</para>

     <para>Remove the temporary group:</para>


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